第一部分:短文改錯題特征
一. 它與單句改錯的不同之處有兩點:第一,短文改錯是將錯誤放在短文之中,這就使考生需要在短文所提供的語境下考慮各句中的錯誤。很有可能出現下面的情況,即從一個句子本身來看,沒有錯誤,而從上下文看來,句子中某個部分是錯的。這種錯誤往往是上下文連貫性和行文邏輯方面的錯誤,如使用連接詞不恰當,人稱代詞的陽性、陰性錯誤等。第二,單句改錯題每句中必有一個錯誤,二短文改錯中可能有的題中沒有錯誤,這樣就增加了答題難度。
短文改錯試題主要是檢測考生對語篇的語言的評價能力。也就是說考生一邊寫文,一邊還要評價自己:組句是否正確,選詞是否合理,語言形式是否一致,行文細節是否嚴謹等等。
短文改錯主要特點為:
1. 語言材料取自于學生的作品;
2. 短文為常見話題或學生身邊事;
3. 短文難度符合學生水平;
4. 語言簡單易懂;
5. 沒有生僻的語言現象或繁難的語句結構。
縱觀全國高考試卷,可以看出出題人考慮到短文改錯還屬于難度系數較大的題型,所以在文章的選擇上盡量降低難度,多數短文好像是一位高中生自己寫的一篇作文,話題比較熟悉,錯誤多為學生在平時寫作中易犯的錯誤。
短文改錯考查能力主要為:
1) 識別錯誤并準確校正錯誤的能力;
2)綜合運用英語知識的能力;
3)準確理解語篇,掌握內容及行文邏輯的能力。
例如全國一卷:短文文體為書信,學生作品,符合考綱要求。考查點的設計為學生常見錯誤,不僅注意語法或詞的錯誤,還注意考查學生在理解語篇意義的基礎上糾錯的能力。
二、短文改錯中錯誤的基本類型
短文改錯中錯誤可以分為兩大類型:語法錯誤和邏輯錯誤。大多數是語法錯誤,少數是邏輯錯誤。語法錯誤又分為詞法錯誤和句法錯誤。句法中的錯誤主要注意特殊句型,復合句以及倒裝句等。
三、短文改錯的考查內容
錯誤包括詞法、句法、語篇結構、行文邏輯等;涉及名詞、冠詞、連詞、介詞、形容詞、副詞、代詞、動詞時態、非謂語動詞等。近年來命題也有新的特點:
1. 考查的都是考生平時學習中常見的并且易犯的錯誤;
2. 加了干擾項的難度,并多次出現負干擾;
3. 加強了對常見的習慣用語的考查;
4. 測試層次增多,可涵蓋知識、領會、運用、分析、綜合及評價諸方面。
5. 錯誤大多出現在句子層面,涉及段落上下文的每年最多只有1-3處(包括時態及行文邏輯)。
6.1999年以前句子結構相對簡單,多為簡單句或并列句,近年復合句有上升趨勢(2000年以來已超過3句)。
7.考查體現學科特點的語言知識
體現學科特點的語言知識是指英語在交際過程中特有的現象。如動詞的各種變化形式、名詞的單復數變化形式、代詞的各種形式、形容詞的各種變化形式等。
(1)名詞:單復數用錯,可數與不可數名詞的混用。
單復數互改是高考英語改錯題的基本題型之一,改動的依據有:一是根據名詞前的修飾限定成份;二是根據上下文的邏輯關系。
(1)They were eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of question. questions(1996.94)
(2)We study quite a few subject,such as maths,Chinese,English and physics. subjects(1997.91)
(3)We practise three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. matches(1998.88)
(4)She said that she and my schoolmate all wished me success,but... schoolmates(2000.77)
(5)...;they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that I'll get good marks in all my subject. subjects(2001.81)
(6)On the way up I was busy taking picture since the scenery was so beautiful. pictures(2002.82)
(2)動詞:時態和語態,常出現在總體時態為過去或現在時中間雜有另一時態的現象;或是及物動詞后無賓語,或是不及物動詞后加了賓語;接從句需要用虛擬語氣的沒有用,需要接ing形式的接了to,或相反等。
1、動詞時態
從過去6年的高考英語改錯題來看,每年都有時態錯誤的小題,而且改動基本集中在一般過去時與一般現在時之間。時態的更改要以上下文的主體時態為依據。
(1)They offered me coffee and other drinks.We have a good time talking and laughing together. had(1996.92)
(2)Dear Bob,
Hello.I learn about you from my English teacher Miss Fang. learned(1997.86)
(3)My favorite sport is football.I was a member of our school football team. am(1998.86)
(4)I am happy with any programme but the others spent a lot time arguing... was(1999.92)
(5)I remembered her words and calm down. calmed(2000.83)
(6)They did not want me to do any work at home;they want me to devote all my time to my studies so that... do(2001.79)
(7)The time passes quickly.Evening came. passed(2002.82
(3)形容詞副詞:混用。常出現需形容詞的地方用了副詞或相反。關系副詞where, when, why等的錯用,如受“介詞+關系代詞”的影響而多加了不必要的介詞等。
(4)介詞;主要是介詞的多余或缺失,錯用。這一部分需要平時多多積累,弄清常用介詞的固定搭配。
(5)主謂一致性;如第三人稱單數漏掉s,或主語為復數,謂語動詞用了單數;再就是就近原則對主語的影響。
(6)冠詞:英語中冠詞只有三個,從高考英語改錯題的角度來看,只能從以下幾個方向出題:1)不定冠詞a和an互改;2)不定冠詞a或an和定冠詞the互改;3)根據需要增刪冠詞。定冠詞the的多余或缺失,如季節,月份,星期,球類及三餐活動,稱呼頭銜前等不能加the的地方加了the,或是same等常和the一起使用的詞卻漏稅掉了the; a, an的混用,注意,判斷一個詞的前面加a還是an不是看其首字母是不是元音字母,而是看首字母的發音是不是元音,如an hour, an honest boy ,其首字母不是元音字母,但其發音卻是以元音素開始,故用an,而 a useful book ,a university, a European, a one-hour trip,雖然以元音字母開始,但卻讀作輔音音素的音,故用a
(1)Today I visited the Smiths-my first visit to a American family. an(1996.87)
(2)Each player must obey∧captain,who is the leader of the team. the(1998.94)
(3)Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. a(注:a為需刪去的詞)(2000.81)
(4)We may be one family and live under a same roof,but... the(2001.82)
(5)As everyone knows,it's∧famous mountain with all kinds of plants and animals. a(2002.76)
(7)數詞:主要是序數詞與基數詞的混用和錯用,如分數的分子大于一時分母沒有用復數等,基數基數詞的復數形式如幾百hundreds of,幾千thousands of漏掉了s,或是當其前有具體數字或several時加了復數,如seven hundred,寫作seven hundreds.
(8)連詞:如需轉折連詞(如but)的時候用了承接連詞(so),或相反.⑼詞性的混淆; ⑽同義詞辨異;
連詞連接的前后兩部分是否合乎邏輯;并列連詞所連接的前后兩部分結構是否等同。這兩點是解答與連詞及其相關問題的高考英語改錯題的關鍵所在。
(1)It was very kind of them to meet me at the station and drove me to their home. drive(1996.89)
(2)Playing football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also give us a sense of fair play and team spirit. gives(1998.90)
(3)She was smiling but nodding at me. and(2000.82)
(4)I remembered her words and clam down. calmed(2000.83)
(5)It looks as if my parents treat me as a visitor and a guest. or(2001.84)
(6)The food was expensive and the service was good. but(2002.80)
(7)As we climbed the mountain,we fed monkeys,visiting temples and told stories. visited(2002.83)
(9)代詞:主要是代詞的格與數的錯用。如男性用了女性代詞,單數用了復數代詞或相反;應當用形容詞性的物主代詞用了賓格,主格或相反,關系代詞的錯用。如只能用that引導的用了其它,或在不能用that的地方卻用了that,或是在“介詞+關系代詞”結構中漏掉了介詞等。
代詞不僅要與其所指代對象一致,其運用還要符合上下文的語氣及邏輯關系。
(1)The Smiths did his best to make me feel at home. their(1996.90)
(2)And they must not break the rules too often if we want to win the game. we(1998.95)
(3)Now someone at home reads instead. everyone/everybody(1999.95)
(4)The day before the speech contest∧English teacher talked to me. my(2000.76)
(5)It was about noon when we arrived at the foot of the mountain.The three of them were very excited. us(2002.79)
(10)常用固定短語用錯。
驗證答案。改完后,要回過頭來重讀一遍全文,查看改過后是否能使語氣通順,時態一致,合乎邏輯。再次通讀可以在初改時感覺不順的地方集中精力,仔細推敲,使答案更加準確。因為有時就一個句子來看可能在兩個地方修改都說地過去,但在上下文中可能只能在一處修改才正確。
所謂固定結構是指英語中一些不能隨意更改的習慣表達。如固定短語中的詞不能冗缺,固定搭配要前后一致等。
(1)It was very kind for them to meet me at the railway station and drove me to their home. of(1996.88)
(2)I use to play ping -pong a lot in my sparetime,but... used(1997.92)
(3)Some wanted to see the programme while others preferred another. one(1999.91)
(4)...but the others spent a lot∧time arguing and ... of(1999.93)
(5)When I was on the stage the next day,I felt so nervous as I shook like a leaf. that(2000.80)
(6)Suddenly,I caught a sight of my English teacher in the crowd. a(注:a為需刪去的詞)(2000.81)
(7)Like most of my schoolmates,I have neither brothers nor sisters-in any other words,I am an only child. any(any需為刪去的詞)(2001.77)
(11)句子結構
句子結構方面的錯誤范圍龐大,解答高考英語改錯題主要可以從以下幾方面來思考:1)句子結構是否完整,成份是否冗缺;2)單詞的詞性與其在句中的功能是否相符;3)復合句中連接主句和從句的關系詞或引導詞的運用是否得當等。
(1)They∧eager to know everything about China and asked me lots of questions.(形容詞不能單獨作謂語) were(1996.93)
(2)I'd like to∧your penfriend ,and get to know more about your country. be/become(1997.87)
(“I'd like to...”中的“to”為動詞不定式的標志詞,其后必須加動詞原型)
(3)I live in Beijing,where is the capital of China. which(1997.89)
(關系詞在定語從句中作主語,應該用關系代詞)
(4)What∧your favourite sport? is(1997.94)
(“主系表”結構中缺少連系動詞)
(5)I look forward to hear from you soon. hearing(1997.95)
(此句中“to”為介詞,其后必須加名詞,代詞或動名詞等相當于名詞的詞)
(6)Play football not only makes us grow up tall and strong but also... Playing(1998.89)
(動詞不能作主語)
(7)Also,the sport teaches us the important of obedience(服從). importance(1998.93)
(形容詞“important”不能作動詞“teaches”的直接賓語)
(8)I was often a little tired after a day's work and watch TV demands very little effort. watching(1999.88)
(同(6),動詞不能作主語)
(9)Unfortunate,there are too many people in my family. Unfortunately(1999.89)
(作為全句的狀語,應該用“Unfortunate”的副詞形式)
(10)...but it didn't matter that I would win or not. whether(2000.78)
(由一般疑問句演變而來的主語從句,應由whether引導)
(11)My parents love me dearly of course and will do all they can∧make sure that I get a good education. to(2001.78)
(此句中“all they can”為“all that they can do”的省略形式,“to make sure that...”為動詞不定式短語作目的狀語)
(12)...,but we do not seem to get much time to talk about together. about(2001.83)
(介詞“about”后無賓語,此介詞多余)
(13)It was about noon∧we arrived at the foot of the mountain. when(2002.78)
(復合句的兩個分句之間缺少連詞)
(12)贅述
高考英語改錯題中的贅述是指在一些固定表達中或從上下文邏輯來看用了多余的詞,從而使句子表達不合規范或造成邏輯上的重復。(注:帶下劃線的詞為多余的詞,即需刪去的詞)
(1)Today I visited the Smiths-my first time visit to an American family. time(1996.86)
(2)In fact,they are planning to visit China in next year. in(1996.95)
(3)First,let me tell you something more about myself. more(1997.88)
(4)We practise for three times every week and often watch football match on TV together. for(1998.87)
(5)Now I can't watch much television,but a few years ago I was used to watch it every night.much(1999.86)
(6)Whenever I see them I will often think of my English teacher. often(2000.85)
(7)I was so tired that I fell asleep at the moment my head touched the pillow. at(2002.85)
(13)易混的詞組
易混淆的詞既包括詞意相同或相近的同義詞、近義詞,也包括外形相似、意義有別的詞組。易混淆詞或詞組的辨析也是高考改錯題中不容忽視的部分。
(1)...but now I am interesting in football. interested(1997.93)
(2)We must keep in mind that we play for the team instead∧ourselves. of(1998.92)
(3)Now I can't watch television,but a few years ago I was used to watch it every night. was(注:was為需刪去的詞)(1999.87)
(4)Unfortunately,there are too many people among my family. in(1999.90)
(5)They did not want me to do any work at family;they want me to... home(2001.80)
(6)Do they really understand their daughter?What things are in other homes,I wonder. How(2001.85)
(7)Evening came down. down(注:down為需刪去的詞)(2002.83)
第二部分:短文改錯題的解題步驟和技巧
1.初讀全文,了解大意。短文是錯誤的載體,不去閱讀全文,了解大意,就無法找出其中的錯誤并加以改正,就好比夜間行路,方向不明,道路不熟,亂闖一通,很難到達自己的目的地。有些考生,考試時怕時間不夠,想省去這個步驟,直接答題,這樣固然可以改出一些錯誤,但遺漏較多,有的是正確的反被改錯了,造成不應有的損失。其實短文改錯題文章較短,而且大多數文章很容易讀懂,通讀一遍花上1-2分鐘足矣, 確定文章用什么時態以及前后使用的人稱代詞。通讀的好處是:讀后心中有數,答題有的放矢。
2.逐句認真閱讀并改正其中錯誤。這里要特別提醒同學們答短文改錯題時要逐句認真閱讀,而不是逐行認真閱讀。某行中是否有錯,應該把該行中各個部分放在其所屬句子中去考慮。一個完整的句子,造就了一個小小的語言環境,句中各部分之間存在著相互依存,相互制約、相互呼應的關系,只有把握了全句,才能發現其中的錯、漏或多余的錯誤。切忌肢解句子,一行一行地找錯。急于求成,欲速而不達。對難句、長句,要從語法的角度對句子成分進行分析,分清主句和從句,分析它們中的主、謂、賓、賓補/主補、狀、表等成分。這類句子中的錯誤開始時很難發現,甚至出現意思不清、邏輯不通的毛病,可又不知毛病在能力,經過句子成分劃分,了解句子結構,理清思路,問題漸漸暴露出來,才能將錯誤改正。
(注意細節)
1.注意聯系上下文, 改錯中每一個錯誤都與上下文息息相關
2.注意破行句。很多錯誤處于此行結尾和下一行首,它們之間往往存在一定的語法或邏輯聯系,而考生往往忽略此處。
3.注意是否虛擬。
4.注意是否真理。
5.注意是否時間、空間變換。
6.發散性思維,一詞多義,一詞多性,一錯多改。
7.先易后難。 一般來說, 行文邏輯比語法錯誤更隱蔽, 不會的要放到最后考慮。
8.對于不會的題應該采取的辦法(左右各給0.5分)
9.注意標記的準確性
10.以句子為單位而不是以行為單位進行判斷。
3.復讀全文,對短文進行整體觀察,發現并改正上下文聯系和行文邏輯方面的錯誤。逐句閱讀改錯一般只能改出與該句整體格格不入的語法或習慣用語方面的錯誤。復讀全文就是從全文的大局來看各句在整個文章中是否還有與全文不符、不妥的東西。這類錯誤本文前面已作了分析,不再贅述。經過以上三個步驟,短文中的錯誤就可以全部改出,而某行中沒有出現錯誤,就自然在該行后面的橫線上劃“√”。
●短文改錯題一般較貼近學生的生活實際,以記敘文、說明文為主,重點考察語言基礎知識的運用。
1.常見類型:
1)必有一個是對的。
2)多義詞1-2個。
3)缺詞1個。
4)其他:①錯詞中,名詞1-2個,關于動詞時態的1個;②非謂語動詞1個;③主謂一致;④副詞、形容詞、代詞、介詞、冠詞、連詞。
2.細節性注意點:
(1)名詞單復數,是否不可數名詞,注意前后的修飾詞或結構。
(2)動詞的時態、語態、第三人稱單數、非謂語形式、虛擬、邏輯關系。
(3)介詞、副詞搭配是否得當。
(4)形容詞與副詞的形式是否錯用、結構是否正確、修飾詞是否恰當。
(5)代詞的性、數、主賓格。
(6)數詞是否準確,是基數詞還是序數詞。
(7)冠詞。
(8)分清簡單句、復合句和并列句。
(9)分清是何種復合句。
(10)句與句之間的邏輯關系。
(11)狀語從句的連詞、時態、虛擬語氣。
(12)定語從句中的關系代詞和關系副詞以及主語與謂語一致關系。
(13)名詞性從句中的連詞選擇、省略、虛擬。
(14)特殊句型。省略、重復與替代。
(15)非謂語動詞結構中的主動與被動、一般與完成、邏輯主語、并列與修飾。動詞不定式中的省略問題。